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Don’t suck at e-mail

These days, your first contact with your boss and coworkers is likely to be via e-mail. So make your first impressions count – don’t suck! Most people do and never realize why they don’t get a reply.

When your e-mail sucks, it gets skimmed and deleted or ignored. Here’s how to do e-mail right. If this checklist is too long for you, hit the first three and you’ll already be way above average.

1. Use the subject line! Put 2 to 7 words in it that summarize your reason for writing. If I’m searching for your e-mail, the keywords you put in the subject line will help me find it and will set it apart from other e-mails from you if we e-mail each other frequently. Preface your subject with FYI if appropriate which tells the recipient no response is necessary.

2. Write three sentences only, most of the time. If one of those sentences is a question, make it the last sentence. Don’t ask more than one question. Three sentences is most important when you are starting a conversation. It shows you value your time and won’t squander it writing long passages about something I don’t care about, am not interested in or have not asked for. It shows you value my time also. It shows you understand that teamwork and communication is a conversation where the ball bounces back and forth between us with rhythm – like a game of ping-pong. Know that the longer your e-mail is — the more likely I am to postpone reading and replying. Your long e-mail is like a basketball pitched across the ping-pong table. It sucks.

email cartoon3. Use a signature with your contact information! If you make me hunt for that information, I dislike you already. It takes 5 min. to set up and shows you have a little concern for me and the ability to have your computer do what you want it to.

4. Spellcheck! And, if you are writing a critical e-mail, print it before sending it and read it out loud. You will catch any and every mistake that way.

5. Reply to important e-mails quickly. If you can’t provide a substantive answer immediately, acknowledge you received the e-mail and say you will write again as soon as you can.

6. Give a heads up using IM or VM, when you send an important e-mail. If you send me an e-mail you consider urgent or unusually important, give me a heads up in some other medium to make sure I’m on the lookout for your e-mail. I prefer instant message, but you need to know your boss’s preference (cell phone, text message, etc).

What good is technology7. Write again, if you don’t receive a reply. Checking to see if I’ve received your e-mail is not a nuisance – it shows you take responsibility for driving results and make no excuses. It shows you understand that I may receive a high volume of e-mail or have my attention splintered in many directions and need your assistance.

8. Use the phone if e-mail isn’t working. Please don’t tell me you haven’t received a reply to the e-mail you sent to so-and-so. Just pick up the phone. It shows you know that e-mail is just a tool and not everyone’s favorite, that you get the job done using whatever tool works best under the circumstances.

9. Take control of your e-mail client by learning keyboard shortcuts and filtering. This shows you understand efficiency with e-mail matters (it’s at the center of most jobs today).

10. Understand your boss’s preferences for what goes on e-mail versus IM and Intranet/wiki/project management system. Ask your boss about preferences for who should be cc’ed about what. You don’t want to be that guy that insists on wasting everyone’s time copying others unnecessarily.

Bonus points – never use an attachment when there is no compelling reason to do so. Attachments suck! Instead of copying and pasting information into an Excel spreadsheet or Word document, just paste right into an e-mail whenever possible.

Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to remove.

— Antoine de Saint-Exupery

 

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  • It is so important to respond to emails quickly! If you fail to do this, you can miss out on so many opportunities and can altogether miss out. Also, like it says above, if you cannot respond to an email with an answer, just respond saying you will get back to them! That is so useful when it comes to acknowledgement of emails and someone trying to get ahold of you.

  • Composing a professional email could make a difference between a good impression and a bad one.
    You can understand a lot about the person by the way they write their email. Some people don’t take time to read emails carefully. They read them much faster than the person writes about them. Make sure you emails convey your message. but are also able to be read in a glance. Makes sense.

  • Throughout my life, e-mail has always been a formal setting; whether writing to a professor, applying for a job, or submitting an inquiry. I learned these skills at a young age because most e-mails that I received and read were professionally written. I naturally imitated the style and format, this left an imprint on what the purpose of an e-mail is to me. Even though my vocabulary was not vast, what was important was learning the formal style and format of an e-mail because it proved useful for the future.

    I agree with how the article emphasizes the importance of writing an e-mail. It not only shows your maturity, it also shows your writing ability in a professional setting. A well written e-mail takes effort and the effort spent is reflected in the style; even though the format may be correct, a poor choice of words or misspelling can ruin its elegance.

    The main reason for my job success is because of my e-mail writing ability. Despite not being part of the job description, I was made responsible for writing and responding to e-mails during my employment at the computer repair center on my university campus. Most of our repairs were Apple products and entailed e-mail communication with Apple repair warehouse facilities whenever a complication arose. With practice, e-mail can prove to be a life altering tool.

  • Writing a good email could make a difference You can read the soul of the person by the way he/she writes the email. Do they address you? Is there any personal things such as greetings to you? Are they explaining things or are they get to the point with no explanations? Are they caring or business-like?

    You can understand a lot about the person by the way they write their email. Most people do not take the time to read the email messages carefully. They read them much faster than the person writes about them. Go back and re-read the messages. I bet you come across with different interpretations and insights than your initial take.

  • All these tips are really important for making a good impression on clients, and it reflects that the organization you work for is efficient. The internal tips and tricks are really handy like the different preferences for what a boss wants. Forget about the aspect of brown nosing and trying to make a good impression; the most important thing is to make work an enjoyable interaction. Everyone is in the same boat, so why not make it less frustrating for everyone.

    I feel like the eighth tip is extremely important with today’s evolving work force. I am young and a borderline millennial and I can understand the anxiety of having to make phone calls, but it is efficient period. Making calls can be great for input on projects and finding solutions. Often times email doesn’t convey the message adequately enough.

    I currently work for Ritz-Carlton Dove Mountain in Arizona, and I will have to share this great find.

  • During my sophomore year of high school and second year being involved in the student government, my Leadership(what my school called the student government) adviser introduced the importance of successful email writing skills after I sent out an email to administration that had “unprofessional” written all over it. Her advice was very similar to the points made in this lesson. She stated that using the subject line was essential when determining if your email would be taken seriously and responded to promptly. She stated how you should always have a greeting with the person’s name, a comma, and two line spaces before you would begin writing the actual email. The email body should have no spelling or grammar mistakes and should be concise without being rude, demanding, or informal. Lastly, she emphasized thanking the person you were contacting for their time and as the lesson mentioned, leaving your name and contact information.

    I believe every individual whether they’re a student or are already in the work force should be able to send professional, well structured emails as email has become one of the the most common methods of communication. I know that when I applied to a work study job I received all information regarding the day of my interview and eventually the job offer via email and now that I have the position everything is communicated through email. If I did not know how to properly write an email I believe I would not have gotten this job or I eventually would be fired.This lesson was extremely helpful to me for the purpose of working smart as when there are issues in my workplace and email is not alleviating the issue I know I have to be efficient and seek other communication methods to do my job successfully.

  • Keep the email short, and keep the email savvy. And don’t, whatever you do, DO NOT make spelling any errors. Oh god. Easily the best advice offered on this post.

    A couple years back, when applying for a job, I ended up having to email the manager of the store. You see, a handful of friends and I had decided to apply together, but none of us got any calls, and none of us received any job offerings. I will admit, it was a pretty competitive job. The store was new, shiny, and plastered right in the middle of the largest plaza in town. It was a healthy restaurant, and, since, well, everyone in America was on a diet, and since everyone applied claiming to be a dedicated health addict, we didn’t stand much of a chance, the inexperienced little tyros that we were.

    My friends all sent long, sappy emails about how their lives were dedicated to healthy eating, how much they loved quinoa, and how delicious broccoli smoothies were (with a side of kale)–and simply satisfying, too! They were great with people– fantastic communicators, they were– and excellent with a spatula and spoon (although there was nothing to flip, no spatula to be used. We’re talking about salads here. And they weren’t even eligible to cook.)

    I sent in three sentences– “Hello, my name is Irem Ersan. I am a recent applicant to your store, love poppy-seed salad, and need money. I am patiently waiting to hear back.Thank you for your consideration.” Okay, make that four.

    Guess who got the job?

  • Keep the email short and keep the email savvy. And don’t, whatever you do, DO NOT make spelling errors. Oh god. Easily the best advice offered on this post.

    A couple years back, when applying for a job, I ended up having to email the manager of the store. You see, a handful of friends and I had decided to apply all together, but none of us got any calls, and none of us received any job offerings. I will admit, it was pretty competitive job. The store was new, shiny, and plastered right in the middle of the largest plaza in town. It was a healthy restaurant, and, well, since everyone in America is on a diet, and since everyone applying claimed to be a dedicated health addict, we didn’t stand much of a chance.

    My friends all sent long, sappy emails about how their lives were dedicated to health, how much they loved quinoa, and how delicious the broccoli smoothies were that they made in the morning (with a side of kale)–and simply satisfying, too! They were great with people– fantastic communicators, the little critters, and would even settle for minimum wage.

    I sent three sentences– “Hello, my name is Irem Ersan. I am a recent applicant to your store, love poppy-seed salad, and would love to work there. Also, I’m a broke high school student desperately in need of money, waiting to hear back.Thank you for your consideration.” Okay, make that four.

    Guess who got the job?

  • This is exactly in line with my experiences in the workplace so far! One way to ensure that you won’t be taken seriously is to have spelling errors or poor formatting in your emails. The easiest way to ensure that the message will be neat is to keep it simple. This helps the other person to absorb the information at a glance and respond quickly!!

  • It is of utmost importance for an employee to present himself or herself in a way that is both professional and respectable. First impressions matter in the professional world and in many cases, one’s first impression with an employer or potential employer is over email or the phone. This applies to the way students should email professors as well.

    I had one professor who immediately lost a lot deal of respect from his students the first week of school. His grammar was terrible, he used texting shortcuts in his emails, words were misspelled, and whenever we emailed him, two and a half weeks would pass before we got a response. Taking what I have learned from both my experience with him and this article, I will change the formatting of my emails to streamline what I need accomplished